Just Rite (inspired by Gary McDonald’s "Time can forge our hatred"’.)


Lay Not Thine Hand On The Lad
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The shadows of yonder that befalls my blunder,
With no more a mask I wonder,
Has not this day descend to the brave under,
Where the thoughts no longer me plunder.

But of truth I behold that nothing renders,
That from within seeks not this wander,
From this that was,
To the bosom of thine own is.

And so in life’s oblivious moments,
This cradle of truth doth seek to be,
In that might of lightning slumber,
As thine eyes to me beseech such another,

For in life’s glide so gently that ride,
Where footprints have all but inhibit this slide,
I have dawned to break this impending pride,
That renders this soul to be at peace.

And so gently I ride…

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2 thoughts on “Just Rite (inspired by Gary McDonald’s "Time can forge our hatred"’.)

  1. brian April 21, 2010 / 11:41 pm

    smooth verse…love how you bring it to such a peace filled close…

    thanks for dropping in today!

    • Viny April 22, 2010 / 6:05 am

      You are most welcome welcome Brian, my pleasure

      Viny

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